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Irbis

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Holy hell!
At first i was like
"hey nice drums"
Then i was like
"woah kickass guitar enter!"
Overall, this is a very catchy song. It tempts me to try and sing to it. If i could get some nice lyrics for it i mean. And thats actualy umm a request. Because, when i sure do alot - i cannot come up with a nice lyrics. Mostly Because english isnt my native. You understand right? But if you would be interested in having this shitty me singing to you song just fetch me some lyrics and i would love to give it a try. I know i am not Sinatra. But hey, no one here is right? right? ._.

As of the song, i think its missing few thing. Or no, not actualy "missing". Thats not what i have in mind. Its more like "how can you make the song even better then it is already"-sort of thing.

For starters: some sort of fluid ending. As of now - the song just ends suddenly like being cut off. Some sort of musical summary (if you know what i mean) would do wonders here.
Another and the last thing i can think of is to maybe add some more SFX, more instruments (if its possible i mean). Even a plain ambience in the background would be great. Thats mostly because both guitar and drums are somewhat "jumpy". And my "jumpy" i mean that they have a hearable muted moments when no sound is playing. A suitable ambience in the background would patch it up nicely.
No more sins i remember :)
Just a solid piece of music.

wow!
Hounting.
Gives me the creeps. In a positive way i mean.
It has this... thing. This tension. Like a song from behind the grave.
Twisted, corrupted, inperfect.
Well its not a song for every day, i tell you that.
But ill sure be comming back here for more.

This is soo chearful! :D
And for some reason it reminds me jRPG oldies like Chrono Cross, Chrono Trigger, FF5 or Xenogear :)
nice!

great track. This seriously deserves some more attention.
I imagine this be easly used in an RPG game or fantasy setting.
Heck, i am tempted to use it myself!

yeah that transitions are a cool idea as an idea but when it comes down to actualy listening it ends up being damn anoying.
Beside that a great piece of music!

WHO THE FUCK VOTED LESS THEN 5/5?
I mean seriously - people whats wrong with you? >_>
This track is hollywood caliber!

Neon-Bard responds:

Hahaha! Thanks for listening Irbis. :)

I'm glad you think the track is of 'Hollywood caliber', that's certainly a nice compliment. Though, personally I think I have quite a long ways to go before I reach that point. Again, thanks for listening!

shame such a nice piece is soo under the radar over here.
Greatly relaxing.
4/5 instead of 5/5 just because it misses "something", some change - i dont know.
beside that - its just fun to listen.
Good job!

protip: dont sing directly to the mic. when you breath out you blow the air at the mic making people's ears bleed.
As for the rest: not bad!

KA-KeitorinArtist responds:

Thank you for the tip! I'll utilize it in future recordings!

sounds like Adiemus. Take it a a huge complement.

Well i am typical Jack of all trades - master of none. I am a hobbyst graphic artist, voice actor, singer, movie maker and shit load of other things.

Age 40, Male

New York

Joined on 9/13/08

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